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Re: MY YWS
This is exactly how I felt when I joined. It's really brilliant, and I'm not just saying that because I prefer Lyric Poetry:). If I'm right, you can let all ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Remembering you!
This is really nice:) It reminds me wonderfully of my darling little child hood. And I'm still a 13 year old! I liked the first line, A brightened ship in ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: I Did It For Them
This is kind of nice, but I don't quite understand it. The rhyme scheme is okay, but I still don't get it. Who are John Jane and Em? What does ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Flood
This is a really interesting piece of work. It's very descriptive with out being obvious, and the vocabulary is absolutely fantastic. I can't think of the word I'm looking for, ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Yet another love poem
Yay! It's so pretty! I'm really happy you got one of these, cuz how else couls we correspond withought you having a face book? lol Im writing really fast cuz ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Tiggy the Piggy
Thats so cute! Never ever change it, ever. I liked The tiggy story, But question number 1:Whats with the mashed potatoe thing? I mean, if you had mashed potatoe's, I ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: A Little Thing Called Life
This is beautiful. This is beyond living life. This is like having an out of body experience. I love love love the first stanza. Wow. I just joined this, but ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: An Adventurer's Faith
This is beautiful. A style of free form, yet seems that the meaning is only of faith- strong undoubted faith- that the writer has locked away in a very special ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Diary
This is absolutely beautiful. I can not be really sure, but by the sounds of this, either someone died, or you have felt heartbreak that the loneliest human on the ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Ode to Harry Potter
*Sonorus* Okay, first of all, I have to say: I really love this. I'm a total Harry Potter nerd, and this is really awesome. I like how descriptive it is, ...
Jul 22, 2011
