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Re: Butterfly Dark
Hello there Zanrill! I'm here to give a review on this piece of work. I hope you enjoy it! First of all, the worldbuilding. It's pretty interesting how you describe ...
Dec 28, 2020 -
Re: I could have helped
Hey there EvaR14! I wanted to give a review to this piece of work, since it's pretty good! Anyways, here we go! - The POV is very interesting, i don't ...
Dec 15, 2020 -
Re: The Beginning of the End of the Beginning (Working Title): Volume One
Hello there Horisun! I wanted to give a positive review on this piece. I hope you enjoy it. Now first, this is pretty interesting for a story that includes zombies ...
Dec 13, 2020 -
Re: Prologue
Hello there Stringbean! I am here to give a review on this piece of work. I hope you enjoy it! Let's get into the positives, shall we? - The characters ...
Dec 12, 2020 -
Re: Beautiful Pain Chapter 1.
Hello there! I'm here to give a review on this first chapter of your story, Beautiful Pain. Sounds pretty good, but there are some things you can improve on. But ...
Dec 7, 2020 -
Re: Beautiful Words
Hello there! i really like this piece so i'm here to give a review on it. It's more positive than most, but i hope you like it. 1. I really ...
Dec 6, 2020 -
Re: The Ocean Is Not An Ocean (Part 1)
Hello there, i wanted to give a review on this piece of work, i don't want to seem like you are a bad writer, and you don't need to use ...
Dec 6, 2020 -
Re: An Analysis of Shakespeare's King Lear
Hello there! I never seen a really good review like this before, so here's my thoughts... This is a little more positive than most i done before, but i hope ...
Dec 6, 2020 -
Re: Stretch My Wings
Hello there! I wanted to give a review on your piece of work. I never reviewed anything like this before, so here it goes... Here's the positive. - It sounds ...
Dec 5, 2020 -
Re: The Gift of Life
Hello there, i wanted to give a short review on your work. So, here it goes... I really like the concept and the whole story a lot, it kinda reminded ...
Dec 5, 2020 -
Re: Conniving Gods (1)
Hello there, i really like this story, but maybe just one thing could be changed. Now, i don't know how to give reviews so a lot of this will sound ...
Dec 5, 2020 -
Re: I am Mari (Chapter 2)
Hello there, i'm here to give a short review on this piece of work, It's pretty good, but here what could be improved. First, i feel like the pacing is ...
Dec 5, 2020
