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Re: The Existential Crisis (A Frog and Toad Story)
Oh my goodness, I remember this series. Truly great literature for the time, so I am here for my first review since I once again got back into my account. ...
Nov 20, 2024 -
Re: botany lessons
I'm assuming you are a new member of YWS, so welcome on in! May I interest you in a review? If so, listen. The first thing I noticed about this ...
Sep 15, 2024 -
Re: Intro to Feeling
As EllieMae has said, this is quite the unique format for an poem. So, I do have an little more to say than ever. Let me get on with my ...
Aug 2, 2024 -
Re: Space Crazy : Prologue - Abducted By Aliens
Alright, yet another review with an short reading time. And look at the time! I should be in bed! So, I don't have much to say because of how short ...
Aug 2, 2024 -
Re: Sweet Nothings That Taste Like Ambrosia
You weren't kidding when YWS said this was an really short read. Glad I found another poet willing to share their poetry on site. Anyways, let me start my review. ...
Aug 1, 2024 -
Re: The Miracle of the Blue Jay
I don't think I have read an narrative essay yet on this site, so excuse any sort of bias coming in from an reader's perspective. Anyways, the title grabbed me, ...
Jul 26, 2024 -
Re: Everbound Prologue : Tapestries And Temptations.
As of right now, I really need some extra points for my future works to be posted on YWS and since this story sounds great just from the prologue alone, ...
Jul 25, 2024 -
Re: A Paradox: Chapter One
It is about time that I start reviewing chapters of books. So, here I am. It is an it shorter than most. My apologies since I am really tired right ...
Jul 11, 2024 -
Re: Shadow of the Orange Tree
I actually just saw you respond to my poem I just posted for this year and since I do want to give back the gift of an comment, I am ...
Jul 9, 2024 -
Re: The Lost Dragon Chapter 1 (LMS VI)
Hello there SoundofMind! I am here to give you a review on your piece! I hope you get something out of it! Review Stuff - I really like the first ...
Oct 1, 2022 -
Re: Heart of the Sea
Hello PoetryMisfit. I'm here to give a review on your piece Heart of The Sea. I really liked it as it felt kinda like The Little Mermaid but with a ...
May 10, 2022 -
Re: Craters
Hey Jster02! I am here to give a review on your piece. I love sci-fi and sometimes space stories but this one makes space a lot more interesting than others ...
Sep 27, 2021 -
Re: Thought Patterns
Hello Zenith! I'm here to give a review about your piece. This piece has a lot of potential and I'm so engrossed in the story! I am kinda rusty on ...
Sep 12, 2021 -
Re: Speed of Light
Hey there LizzyTyler! I am here to give a review on this piece of poetry that you wrote. Hope you enjoy it! Let's start with the positives. - The writing ...
Jun 9, 2021 -
Re: conflagration
Hey there Luminescence! I'm here to give a review on this piece! I hope you take this in consideration and that you like it! First of all, the beginning lines ...
Dec 28, 2020