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Yes but if you're going to use punctuation it should be done correctly. That "creative licence" is really only applying to using commas and periods or not :P

The changes you made improved by a long shot! :D Keep it up!

Thanks (and yes finally)! :D You're right on point with what it was about. The wolf represents multiple things but its mostly my depressing thoughts (as cliche as that sounds ...

It's not about us at all and I've talked to him enough that I could post it and explain it if need be

There were stanzas >_

Thanks I'll try and fix that

Thanks! :D

I'm really glad you enjoyed this! Thanks for the feedback :D

It's not abstraction to me, but showing the two extremes that she has. It's contrast of how she comforts me at times but has the ability to kill me if ...

Wow your review makes me hungry, haha! And that is what I meant with hungry, a word used like taking me over. I purposely went back and forth with things ...

Thanks!

More than before yes :P

Woah okay I didn't say it wasn't right I'm trying to help make it clearer..

That's really nice and observant of you! I'm glad someone like you enjoys my work :) I'll fix that comma issue

Thanks!