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Re: Ten Reasons Why Nate Is Afraid Of Lampposts
Whoops. The Narnia comment was supposed to be here.
Oct 18, 2015 -
Re: Ten Reasons Why Nate Is Afraid Of Lampposts
They are everywhere temporally, too. Remember Narnia?
Oct 18, 2015 -
Re: The Undead Cat
This isn't a review, but a flaw I saw in the experiment. Th cat obviously knows whether it is alive or dead. It measures the position/ state of decay(whatever, it's ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: The Power
Animekaratepup has written something that I would like to put as a companion piece: Why am I a Christian?
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Why am I a Christian?
I like it. This shows the better side of religion.
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Mailboxes and Hesitation
kathy- third paragraph, last sentence. I like the reflective nature of the piece.
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: I am Medusa
Distill (concentrate, refine) the way you express your theme, to make it stronger.
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter One)
The first chapter sucks, basically. the reason is the reader doesn't know to expect some thing weird whe she turns around. all the preveious "weird" things fall into a catgory ...
Oct 15, 2008 -
Re: Shoes
Thank you.
May 10, 2008
