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  • Other » Humor, Other Re: Ten Reasons Why Nate Is Afraid Of Lampposts

    Whoops. The Narnia comment was supposed to be here.

    Oct 18, 2015
  • Other » Humor, Other Re: Ten Reasons Why Nate Is Afraid Of Lampposts

    They are everywhere temporally, too. Remember Narnia?

    Oct 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Undead Cat

    This isn't a review, but a flaw I saw in the experiment. Th cat obviously knows whether it is alive or dead. It measures the position/ state of decay(whatever, it's ...

    Jun 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Power

    Animekaratepup has written something that I would like to put as a companion piece: Why am I a Christian?

    Jun 1, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Why am I a Christian?

    I like it. This shows the better side of religion.

    Jun 1, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mailboxes and Hesitation

    kathy- third paragraph, last sentence. I like the reflective nature of the piece.

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: I am Medusa

    Distill (concentrate, refine) the way you express your theme, to make it stronger.

    Jul 13, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter One)

    The first chapter sucks, basically. the reason is the reader doesn't know to expect some thing weird whe she turns around. all the preveious "weird" things fall into a catgory ...

    Oct 15, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Shoes

    Thank you.

    May 10, 2008


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