PsyLynx

I disagree with everyone. Forbading? Please. That's NOT A WORD. I like the poem. I like how it is, and don't think that anything should be changed. It feels...creepy, sad, ...

thank you, I hadn't noticed and it is an excellent point. :D oh, and thank you. :D :D :D :D

Eyne is an archaic word, it's in Shakespeare a lot, it means all a person's eyes. I use it to include the mind's eye. I think you can do that, ...

I'm naive? Oh dear, I'm screwed up already without learning more bad adult news.

spiffilicious!

the format really didn't get translated well, that annoys me. Tabs don't really seem to have a place in HTML.

It sounds out vaguely weak, I think...rhyming just to rhyme, but then you got onto somthing, and it flowed totally horrowshow, I love it. It felt like Poe, only not ...

I dig, feels goodlio.

yeah, I must agree--------Huh? It did rhyme... I suppose it's an in-thing that I'm not included in. *weep.* *shrug*

yeah, man, I love this. Stunning and shimmering, and what the hell else can I say? *Shrug* Extraordinarily mature comes to mind, language that drips with wisdom.

I think it's brilliant. You show real maturity. Your word choice is so strange, I love it. :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :D ...

purdy.

huh.

The scary part is that it makes sense to me...............and I like it............................................

Yeah, I think that bit may be the best stanza I've ever written. And I don't know how to quote, either...but I also don't want to learn, become I'm a ...