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Re: The Fields of Waterloo
I really thought it was good. Had a good beat, good rhythm, and built it in my mind well. There is something that is hauntingly beautiful, randomly beautiful, and more ...
Feb 28, 2005 -
Re: Hott.
it's a good message. Unfortunately, the sort of people who need to hear this message aren't the ones who read poetry....like writing a book entitled "how to read."
Feb 28, 2005 -
Re: SHOUT
It was an experiment. Yeah, sorry about spelling mistakes. I thought I had ironed them out, guess not. Um, okay, I want to communicate. Read it, in your head. Hear ...
Feb 27, 2005 -
Re: resonation
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. I like it. I like all of this website. But this was awesome.
Feb 27, 2005 -
Re: summer heat (needs better title)
sweet and sexy as hell. I like it. Maybe you could lengthen it and tie a story to it...I donno. It's great as it is, though.
Feb 27, 2005 -
Re: Shell
really good. Love the last couple of stanzas. I think it needs a few more images, though.
Feb 27, 2005 -
Re: The Perfect (MAJOR CHANGES)
I liked it. Very pretty, easy to read, good words, good story, etc. I didn't focus on it closely enough to find anything that I would improve about it, which ...
Feb 23, 2005 -
Re: Half a Tank of Gas
it surprised me, a little bit. It was close to getting to be redundant, close to being too....I don't know, just dry of ideas, but it wasn't either of those ...
Feb 21, 2005 -
Re: wordance
sweet as hell. Damn, this site kicks TYWC's ass.
Jan 30, 2005
