PsyLynx

I like it, and think that you should edit away your explanation; I was thinking of war, hell, all of these terrible things, and getting all of my own ideas ...

If by 'random' you mean that her similes and metaphors weren't cliche, I'd say that you're right. If you meant it in a bad way, you're definitely wrong. This was ...

Screw Incandescence. I hate him. Lol. I should give him credit that once he was online, and I got all emotional at him and he let me, because I needed ...

I really liked the beginning, when it was talking about all that had happened, but when it turned into the narrator talking about there being a lot of love, and ...

Well, I want more. It was enticing and exciting, though I think it could've had more description. Also, your grammar is a little off, and your understanding of where commas ...

As if you need another compliment of a comment, I thought it was excellent...a footnote to tell me what the french stuff meant would be nice, just for those inquisitive ...

Yes, definitely everything that everyone said...chillingly real... and the only thing that I can find that you may want to change is the name; since 'tenor' is singular, it should ...

"As the ripples spirit across the fawn tinted surface" Yummy line. I loved when she woke up, too....and the ending was beautifully written. I like the story.... will I find ...

I don't know, man, it was kinda...cliche. Nothing really cool, no images, nothing to grasp onto. Just abstract good vs. bad shit, and no specifics as to what happened...I think ...

I thought it's really good....reminds me of a sadness I sometimes feel, and rarely but occasionally am consumed by....and it reminded me of night, and loneliness, and staring at dying ...

some details don't seem to fit...he's been all alone in this place for seventeen years, and he still feels awkward when he speaks to himself? And nobody came to town ...

sorry, I couldn't read wasn't a story, nor was it science fiction, it was a report....I've done and read enough of those in my day. I think that's why nobody's ...

it makes sense to me, Jennafina. I liked the beginning, I love disjointed stuff. Fuck Sam. I think it went way too long, lost my attention after a while, and ...

I really liked it a lot. Some of it...seemed a little bit boring, in its simplicity, but...some of its simplicity was quite lovely. I adore the stanza "the pavements are ...

Oh man, it was soooo good, though maybe a lot of it is just the state I'm in, but I loved it, utterly. I'll look at it later, and I'll ...