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Re: the shift of the heart
Hi there! This captures something I think a lot of people don’t talk about enough, which is that grief doesn’t only change your relationship with the person you lost; it ...
Jun 29 -
Re: to be loved in an infinite slumber
Hey! I thought I’d drop by to leave a review on this wonderful poem :D I really, really like the atmosphere of this! It has such a sleepy, half-dreaming feeling ...
Jun 28 -
Re: Mono no Aware
Hello! I thought I’d leave a review on this song :) I’ll focus on the lyrics/structure/emotional arc rather than the music side! I don't play guitar, so I fear I ...
Jun 28 -
Re: i have only knelt in prayer at the curbside
Hello there! I thought I’d drop by to leave a review on this lovely poem! I really love the atmosphere of this. It has this apocalyptic feeling to it, and ...
Jun 27 -
Re: Father
Hi again! Whoa! This whole poem feels like it is being swallowed by rage, which works really well considering that rage is literally personified throughout the poem. I really like ...
Jun 27 -
Re: the muse loves me
Hi there! I thought I’d drop by to leave a review on this poem :D First off, this is such an interesting poem because the voice feels loving, frustrated, tender, ...
Jun 27 -
Re: very awed, immensely flawed.
Hi there! I thought I’d drop by to leave my first 'review' on this poem :) First off, wow, this is a really intense poem. I think the lack of ...
Jun 27
