Priyansha

Wow! I really really liked this. The concept was new and unique for me and the emotions flowed out of the page. I kinda liked the fact that you haven't ...

Hi, I loved this poem. I really did. I'm not just saying it, I thought this poem was fantastic. I can totally relate to it. All of us want to ...

Hi, Welcome to YWS. I really liked your story. It was sweet and would make everyone wish they had someone like Kashif in their lives. I like the concept and ...

Hi I found this story interesting. You have some pretty good ideas. I wish you best of luck for the contest. The story started off pretty well, but when it ...

Hi, I thought it was funny that the person who's being stalked is actually stalking the person who's stalking the first person. Sorry, I confused myself. :) But you know ...

Hi, I found your story very interesting. I think the objective of the beginning of a story is to make a reader want to know more and I think you've ...

Hi, I really loved your poem. The concept was fantastic. I loved the ending especially, I think it was phenomenal. Here are my suggestions: Some where there’s always a desire ...

I loved it. You CAN make out how much hard work you must have put in. It also makes your imagination run wild. As soon as I read the second ...

I loved it. I liked how the feelings and the situation of the young single mother are slowly unravelled. Really great job. I'll do the infuriating crime of point out ...

I found this poem absolutely brilliant. I was awe-struck the whole while. I wished I could write like you. You set the mood, your rhymes were perfect and you dazzled ...

Hi, I liked the story. I found a few mistakes here and there so I'm just going to point them out now. I haven't read the other reviews so please ...

Really fascinating. Makes me want to know more. I don't or rather can't write fantasy stories myself, but I love reading them. A few suggestion now. In the second paragraph ...

I saw a few grammatical and spelling mistakes while reading your article but I'm not going to point them out. I know you didn't post this article for that. I'm ...

i really liked it. i was enthralled the whole time. the ending is just lovely. i don't understand the title though. i understand how the story is centered around the ...

i understood what your poem was about while reading it. it reminded me of the poem 'mirror' by sylvia plath, but maybe that's because i've just read that poem. i ...