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Re: Harry Potter and The Deathly Hallows
This book was the best! :D I'm amazed at how all of the characters have dramatically changed and matured since the first HP book. It's kind of sad to see ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: A Midnight Walk Through Zombie Park: Chapter One
I really, really like this. Very descriptive; I can see everything going on in my head. I like the way you get into the characters head and share what they ...
Jun 24, 2010 -
Re: Gradual Storms
I like how descriptive you were, as you can actually see what is happening in your head. It really relates to alot if not everyone, because we have experienced that ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Father
I really like this, and I can honestly say that it almost brought me to tears. I love the strong emotion and I could sense they weren't just coming from ...
Jun 21, 2010 -
Re: The Enchanted Ones
I like how descriptive you were, especially in the first paragraph. The sounds of people and their shoes, the cars passing by, I can actually visualize that in my head. ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: ...
This was a great piece of work! I placed myself in the very same position as the fire in your excerpt. I felt as it felt, I saw as it ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: D.Eagle
I like how you described everything. I could actually visualize in my head some of the things that were going on, such as the hospital scene and you in the ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Dark Odyssey
Wow this was very exciting! I love the way you described everything, as it helps me to imagine it in my head. Really good use of description there. It was ...
May 28, 2010
