PrinceofTerror

Hmmm... I've already edited the poem. Do you still think I should add something? :) I mean some lines in between?

Wow! thanks Armisael! :D Yeah, I'll post more of my work soon.

This is very flattering Cupcakes. hahaha. Yes, I'm looking forward to that. Just gonna make some few revisions of this because I think it's still flawed. But I'll definitely submit ...

Hi Matthew, I tried posting this into 4 stanzas. I don't know why it ended up like this. hmmm

Thank you so much Edelweiss. :) Can you help me tweak it a little bit? Except for the grammar issues you've indicated above. :D

You know what, you're right. I tried a lot of experimenting out here. :D Thanks for the advice. I'll make it better next time.

Thanks TZH. :) This poem is broken down to several stanzas, I just don't know why the spacing is different once posted. And this poem is too long. haha Thanks ...

Well thank you, but I just don't understand why my spacing doesn't appear the way I wrote it. This poem is split into several stanzas. Hmmm...

I love this one Aleeeeeey! XD You inspired me work harder in poetry. That's nice.

To my mentor Aley, This is one of the most incisive, precise poem I've ever read. Very sophisticated yet very deeeeeep. You're right, we should keep it simple. :)

No it isn't confusing or anything. I'm just saying. It's a review anyway, so I hope your not upset.

Haha. I hope we could be friends.

Never, never, never give up! This is a good short story that occur (probably) during the medieval era. Every scene was well described, and every movement of the main character ...

No problemo. :) Keep it up

It's my first time to see a poem written in this format. I don't know if there really is a poem like this. I think it would be much better ...