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Oh also btw, the reason that I don't really describe the castle at all, is being, like you indicated, she is going to "run" away from it, as the next ...

Thaaank you Noelle for writing this review

OK lemme write some of my notes into a review ;)

Heya BlueAfrica, here I am just to comment that I have read this first chapters. I think that you have plenty and enough reviewers on this chapter, even though it's ...

Thanks for clarifying some things here. That's what I thought with Ashley ;) , but I wasn't sure. Sorry that I confused Syrin with a place name, I will keep ...

Np, I was happy to review it. Sorry that it was so short but I had written half of it and then when I refreshed the page,it got erased :( ...

Thaaaank you so much for your review! I knew something was missing, and now you pointed out that it's the audiences reaction. I will try to work that in. Capo,the ...

Aww thanks! To clarify a little bit here Halia is the King's niece meaning that the King is her uncle and that kind of makes her a princess. The guy ...

Halia isn't inside the palace,this ritual takes place outside on the courtyard. Capo and Halia will be best buddies throughout this whole novel :) I will work that in throughout ...

Sorry I think that I accidentally posted twice x.x Didn't mean to . . . *forgive me please,sir*

Just checked that I reviewed this also, so I am good with this chapter ;) sorry that I was going backwards,I just wanted to start at the beginning

Ping! *reminds you to write a review for this* :)

Heya r4p17, pretzelsing here for a review of your next chapter of this novel. I see that you have some very thorough review here but I will try to add ...

Ping! Time to review this! *spams* :)

Thank you for writing this,Gravity.