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Hi pretzelsing here for a review(originally pretzelsnow but i changed my username), I liked the suspense that you showed in this story.You kept me at the edge of my seat. ...

Hello this is pretzelsing reviewing this story for you(by the way I was originally pretzelsnow but I changed my username, but I assure you that I am the same person ...

Hi, this is pretzelsnow here for a review, you requested a review on the forum thread.Here it is and I hope that it helps you: I will touch of some ...

Hi, this is pretzelsnow for a review: This was a really sad story :( You skillfully wrote this and made a pool of tears in my eyes. Through this whole ...

Hi,pretzelnsnow here for a review, you requested it in my forum post. For starters, I personally liked the vividness of this story. It was intriguing, suspenseful, and scary. Seeing it ...

Hi, this is pretzelsnow here for a review This story is accented with a hint of worry and feat throughout this whole story. Sky is fearing for Snow and so ...

Hi pretzelsnow here for a review, I really think that your poem is a masterpiece. It makes so much sense and it is so beautiful. I like how you didn't ...

Hi this is pretzelsnow here doing a review: I love this cliff-hanging suspense that you have during this whole story. You had me sitting on the edge of my chair ...

Hi,pretzelsnow here for a review I loved the suspense that you build in this story;I was sitting at the edge of my seat,just waiting to know what happened next. I ...

Hi,pretzelsnow here for a review! I really liked this next chapter in your story. I have read your previous chapters and I truly have to say that I enjoy your ...

Hi pretzelsnow here for a review: I thought that this part of the story was really good. You used repetition a lot while using the same word three times. I ...

Hi, pretezelsnow here for a review Well, I am not sure if I jumped in on something in the middle of a story or something and sorry if I did ...

Hi pretzelsnow here for a review. I really liked this kind of showed a budding romance in my opinion or at least gave the impression of one.The only thing is ...

Hi, this is pretzel snow here for a review, First of all I hope that this is part of a short story or book or series so I assume I ...

Hi pretzelsnow here for a review, I truly am delighted that you jumped right into the action. It makes the story exciting and I want to read more. I suggest ...