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Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I really liked this next installment of your story. I like that you are separating it into small sections that are not that long ...

Heya pretzelsing here for a review, 1)Your first sentences intrigues me, and it made me want to read and answer like the questions: Why is this the last time?Why is ...

Heya pretzelsing here for a review, To start off I have to say that I really liked this story, because it was written from a unique perspective and POV-that of ...

Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I know that two people already reviewed but I would like to do a very thorough review.Let me begin: I think that you repeatedly ...

Heya pretzelsing here for a review, Okay, so I will do both general things and nitpicks and I hope that it all help better improve your writing.First of all, what ...

Heya,I am following your novel, pretzelsing here, but while going back I have realized that I didn't read or review this chapter,oopps.Here goes my review: "Aren't I your only brother?" ...

Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I have reviewed your Chapter 1 so I am going here backwards.Overall, reading this I would like to point out that you could show ...

Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I have to say that I loved this chapter!It was great! Having said with that,let me do a little unexpected introduction. This chapter was ...

Heya pretzelsing here for a review as you requested: I will do both general and nitpicks in your text.Here we go; At the beginning of your work, a couple of ...

Heya pretzelsing is here for a review, You requested this review on the forums so here it goes.I will try to be very general and not nitpick at all. First ...

Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I personally really liked this was great!I was encouraged by my friend to push myself and have a critical eye of pieces that I ...

Heya pretzelsing here for a review: I really did enjoy your story,it was great and you have a talent for writing!Here we go,with my review: I would personally improve on ...

Heya,pretzelsing here for a review, I really enjoyed the constant suspense in this story.I don't really consider this as a prolouge because I think that the prolouge would answet the ...

Heya pretzelsing here for a review, So here in this sentence No doubt it will mess up my entire plot, which I’m starting to doubt more and more. Plot?I thought ...

Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I have to say that I loved this!You have a talent for writing. I felt like you were repeatinf yourself in these twl places: ...