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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: In which Emmaline sees the Court

    Heya Kyllorac, pretzelsing here for a review. I see that you only have two short reviews on this piece :( Never fear pretzel is here! ;) I have gotten used ...

    Mar 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 4.2

    Heya Deanie, pretzelsing here for a review for this exciting novel that you are writing! Let's begin, shall we? but it’s all locked away in a bank account for when ...

    Mar 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 9 Part 3

    Heya sugar, pretzelsing here for a review, after a very long time(one week-but that's just because I was reviewing other works- and I still have a very long list of ...

    Mar 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Adonia Beloved / Chapter 5

    Heya LittleFox,pretzelsing here for a review. I have to honestly tell you that I was a little bit disappointed that this wasn't the action chapter that you were talking about ...

    Mar 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: In which Rothur reveals the curse

    Heya Kyllorac, pretzelsing here for a review of the next part of your story. Let's begin, shall we? In time, Rothur rose among the ranks to become the first King’s ...

    Mar 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Distorted View - Chapter One

    Heya Anlon, pretzelsing here for a review,as requested by my friend @godlypopo Anyways, let's begin, shall we? Your first paragraph was a bit unappetizing because it was ssssso long to ...

    Mar 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Story of Us Chapter Four: Both

    Heya Steph, pretzelsing here for a promised review. Thanks so much for the PM and reminding me, I usually don't look in the green room because I am following a ...

    Mar 21, 2015
  • Other » Fantasy, General Re: In which Emmaline first pretends

    Heya Kyllorac, pretzelsing here for a review, this story intrigued me (yes i do like your writing style :))because you said that you were working in no particular order, which ...

    Mar 20, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Action / Adventure Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 4.1

    Heya Deanie,pretzelsing here for a review for this chapter! Again there are only three reviews here so I am ready! Let's begin, shall we? After what seemed like ages, I ...

    Mar 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Cactus Leaves-- For Gain (Ch. 2)

    Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I actually found your chapter in the green room, with already one review. I specifically requested that you PMed me the link when the ...

    Mar 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 9 Part 2

    Heya sugar, pretzelsing here for another review,I choose to skip some chapters and review this chapter(because this one has 6 short reviews) those other chapters had 6 reviews each. Anyways,let's ...

    Mar 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 3.2

    Heya Deanie,pretzelsing here for a review(for another chapter of this novel ;))I see that you only have the reviewers left :( so I will try to top it) Let's begin ...

    Mar 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Broken Pencils Are Pointless 3.1

    Heya Deanie, pretzelsing here for another review on this next chapter. Let's begin,shall we? It was difficult to stay still in class. If she has so many bruises and cuts, ...

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 2.2

    Heya Deanie, I will review this chapter.Just wanted to tell you that I have a 5- review policy in novels. Oh yeah, and I did read all of those chapters ...

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Pure of Heart Part 1

    Heya TigerMoon, pretzelsing here for a review. I felt like reviewing this because of the main characters name,Kaia, which is actually my sister's name(except it's spelled Kaya-I like my sister's ...

    Mar 13, 2015


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