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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 11

    Heya sugar, pretzelsing here for a review,I haven't done this in a long time but I really want to gush about this book. It is so great great great and ...

    Mar 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Typo Alley~C Part Two

    Heya R4P17 it's pretzelsing here for a review,I see that you want nitpicks and so you will get a through nitpicks review.Let's begin,shall we? I walk up to the rise ...

    Mar 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Technology, Action / Adventure Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 5.3

    Heya Deanie, pretzelsing here for a review, I see that this is still in the green room,such a shame :( On the brighter side, I am all caught up with ...

    Mar 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Stream

    Heya Kyllorac, pretzelsing here for another review of your work. I got to say that I am lovin and adoring every next chapter more and more

    Mar 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 10 Part 3

    Heya sugar, pretzelsing here for a review. I am coming back to this since you have four longer and one very short review, so I thought that you could need ...

    Mar 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Typo Alley~​C Part One [Revised]

    Heya R4P17 pretzelsing here for another review(since you only have 4 reviews here) and so I came to add mine. Let's begin,shall we? I like how you personalize the rest ...

    Mar 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Narrative Re: A Sonnet for Satan.

    Heya godlypopo, pretzelsing here for a review of your sonnet. I don't believe that I have reviewed anything else of yours before, and you can thank the YWS Cup for ...

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Hidden behind the drapes

    Heya Rituparna, pretzelsing here for a this is one of my first times reviewing poetry(I usually do prose) but I write poetry so I know all about it. Let's begin,shall ...

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 5.2

    Heya Deanie, pretzelsing here for a review of this next chapter of your novel. Let's begin,shall we? I ask, wishing she would just go away. Everyone should go away right ...

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 10 Part 2

    Heya sugar, pretzelsing here for another review of you next chapter. I see that you were getting really short reviews so I will try to ace that. Let's begin,shall we? ...

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Post

    Heya Kyllorac, pretzelsing here for another review, I see that you have introduced another character-nice.:) And of course the dialogue is soooo interesting, because it's spoken by inanimate objects.

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Typo Alley~B Part Two

    Heya r4p17, pretzelsing here for the first review of your novel. As I said, I did read the chapters before so I do what was going on. BTW I just ...

    Mar 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 5.1

    Heya Deanie, pretzelsing here for a review, because I see that you only have 2 :( Let's begin, shall we? I steadily felt it riding up my thighs with every ...

    Mar 23, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 10

    Heya sugar, pretzelsing here for another review, I saw that this had only 5 reviews(and one of them was short and another one was from a newbie), so here I ...

    Mar 23, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Adonia, Beloved / Chapter 6

    Heya LittleFox, pretzelsing here for a review! Yes, the action that you told me is here, although I was greatly surprised. Anyways, let's begin,shall we? I have to say that ...

    Mar 22, 2015


'They are afraid of nothing,' I grumbled, watching their approach through the window. 'Together, they would brave Satan and all his legions.'
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights