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Re: The Veil - Chapter 11
Heya sugar, pretzelsing here for a review,I haven't done this in a long time but I really want to gush about this book. It is so great great great and ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Typo Alley~C Part Two
Heya R4P17 it's pretzelsing here for a review,I see that you want nitpicks and so you will get a through nitpicks review.Let's begin,shall we? I walk up to the rise ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 5.3
Heya Deanie, pretzelsing here for a review, I see that this is still in the green room,such a shame :( On the brighter side, I am all caught up with ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: The Stream
Heya Kyllorac, pretzelsing here for another review of your work. I got to say that I am lovin and adoring every next chapter more and more
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 10 Part 3
Heya sugar, pretzelsing here for a review. I am coming back to this since you have four longer and one very short review, so I thought that you could need ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: Typo Alley~C Part One [Revised]
Heya R4P17 pretzelsing here for another review(since you only have 4 reviews here) and so I came to add mine. Let's begin,shall we? I like how you personalize the rest ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: A Sonnet for Satan.
Heya godlypopo, pretzelsing here for a review of your sonnet. I don't believe that I have reviewed anything else of yours before, and you can thank the YWS Cup for ...
Mar 27, 2015 -
Re: Hidden behind the drapes
Heya Rituparna, pretzelsing here for a this is one of my first times reviewing poetry(I usually do prose) but I write poetry so I know all about it. Let's begin,shall ...
Mar 27, 2015 -
Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 5.2
Heya Deanie, pretzelsing here for a review of this next chapter of your novel. Let's begin,shall we? I ask, wishing she would just go away. Everyone should go away right ...
Mar 27, 2015 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 10 Part 2
Heya sugar, pretzelsing here for another review of you next chapter. I see that you were getting really short reviews so I will try to ace that. Let's begin,shall we? ...
Mar 27, 2015 -
Re: The Post
Heya Kyllorac, pretzelsing here for another review, I see that you have introduced another character-nice.:) And of course the dialogue is soooo interesting, because it's spoken by inanimate objects.
Mar 27, 2015 -
Re: Typo Alley~B Part Two
Heya r4p17, pretzelsing here for the first review of your novel. As I said, I did read the chapters before so I do what was going on. BTW I just ...
Mar 25, 2015 -
Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 5.1
Heya Deanie, pretzelsing here for a review, because I see that you only have 2 :( Let's begin, shall we? I steadily felt it riding up my thighs with every ...
Mar 23, 2015 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 10
Heya sugar, pretzelsing here for another review, I saw that this had only 5 reviews(and one of them was short and another one was from a newbie), so here I ...
Mar 23, 2015 -
Re: Adonia, Beloved / Chapter 6
Heya LittleFox, pretzelsing here for a review! Yes, the action that you told me is here, although I was greatly surprised. Anyways, let's begin,shall we? I have to say that ...
Mar 22, 2015
