Prakash

Thank you for your review :) The errors are fixed.

Thank you for your review. It was really helpful. I will fix those errors. :)

I hope you hadn't done this on purpose. Instead of saving it as a draft, I guess you clicked 'Publish it' before finishing the work. No problem, Don't sweat it. ...

I think I should learn from you how to review and gain points :P

Thank you for your review :) I will fix those errors

Thanks for reading. I must admit that the ancient Tamil literature called 'Akananuru' inspired me to write this poem.

Thanks for the positive review. Yeah, as you said, the word 'Himalayas' in bracket interrupt the flow. I think I add it as post script. Thanks again :)

I am happy you liked it :D

Thank you for your positive review :)

Thank you for your review :) Yeah, this is my first free verse. And thanks for your suggestions. It would definitely hone my writings :)

Thank you for the review:)

Thank you for your review :) and the link too :) That's what I am searching for. And I got it because of you. Thanks again. It's a great help.

Thank you for your detailed review. It really helped me a lot. I have fixed the errors. The main character doesn't have any memory issue. "I hate the love that ...