Poseidon

I've changed somethings so plz reread carefully if you've already read it. There is no longer a queen, I took it out because I have a new idea.

Thanks!

Well there's a few things: 1. Mrs. Ricord is the nice encounter and Mr. Ricord is the mean one. 2. James ran into the drunk so that when the two ...

You are veeeeeery welcome. (:

Thank you thank you thank you. This rrally helped alot. I was hoping someone would say something about the suspence. I will definitely post you on the next chapter.

Haha Thanks. Cant wait to read yours too. :)

Thank you so much. The second xhater is also edited.

Your welcome. Thanks for clearing things up.

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Would you guys like me to redo this chapter or go to the next one?

Thanks I will. :)

Thank you very much

Hi, well first off this is a great diary writing. I feel as if though man, a homeless man, is talking to me personally. I bet many readers will be ...

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