Pompadour

The 'foreign language' is actually a first language for me, so I tend to forget that it's a clunky read for people who do not read/speak it! I'll be careful ...

Hi there! I'm here to review this poem! First off, this poem is very cool, like I read it twice and kt was even cooler when I read it twice. ...

Remind me to review this later please~

Aidan treating Pedra like an equal is something I mean to expound upon in the next Evian-centred chapter, actually! So I'm glad that the difference in the way both were ...

You're more coherent than I am when I'm tired and I appreciate all your lovely reviews.

On 4., it was Lira who was staring at the room in fascination, and Evian who was laughing at her as she did. XD I missed that left/right error, though, ...

You're welcome! c: I'm glad this proved useful to you. By 'bland and uninspiring', I meant that the phrases were the kind that have been so overused in literature that ...

I love this.

That makes sense.

It's not a sucky review at all! You pointed out a very valid criticism--stretching the beginning out is something that I've started doing for LMS out of desperation , simply ...

I HAVEN'T WORKED ON THIS IN A YEAR maybe it'll make a comeback.... some day.

Miles was intended to be a 'he', yes! But I'm cool with however anyone chooses to read into it~ (Which is the fun part of writing in second-person, I guess. ...

Thanks. Good to know.