PollarBear14

This poem, with a little work, could be a very confronting, powerful piece. The first stanza is, in my opinion, not benefited by the repetition of the line "I pick ...

This poem is obviously very deep and I really like it because of that. As LosCadaver said, the flow of the poem is a bit klunky but I'm guessing that ...

Hi. This poem is very positive but I can't help feeling that it's a bit of a cliche or at least your choice of language is. Your similies leave something ...

I really liked the thoughts behind this poem and the language you used. Great job. The last half is especially good because it is filled with a sort of wistful ...

This haiku is very enjoyable to read. Personally I love a haiku that can convey a powerful emotion or meaning despite its limmited words. Not every haiku can do that ...

This piece is very well written and I enjoyed it a lot. The language really is what makes this poem so great because II feel your choice of words really ...