PoeticGlow

Thank you, matthewmazer! I agree: some parents are too pushy, and at some point, we as individuals need to put our foot down, because in the end, it's OUR lives, ...

Thanks for the kind and wonderful feedback, tydecker777! I am usually very simple on my word choices, and don't like to write down anything complex! I believe that sometimes, simplicity ...

Hello there, AmeliaCogin! Thanks for your feedback! Allow me to try and make some clarity for you: "Do you know the control that you no longer bear?" ( what does ...

I like your suggestion, Soulkana! Thank you, and happy writing to you as well! :)

Thank you, MattLangg! And yes, this poem is indeed about someone I missed at the time (someone that I still kind of miss, to tell you the truth!) I shall ...

PurpleHeart, I believe you just made my day! :) It warms my heart greatly to come home, log on to YWS, and see positive and touching feedback on my work! ...

Thanks so much for your inspiring feedback! :)

Beautifully written! Simple, and to the point! I LOVED the last line! :) Keep it up!

Your words are most appreciated, SmylinG! :) Touching, truly! Thanks so much!

Thank you very much, lele253isme! I've considered maybe self-publishing some of my work! And as for songwriting, I'm hoping I'll meet the right people for that at some point! ;)

Thank you for the honest feedback, everyone! :) I'll be sure to be more cautious with my rhyming choices/rhyming in general, even though this particular piece is rather old! ;)

Hello, sarebear! Thanks for your feedback, I really do appreciate it! By all means, you're not being a hard critic at all! As I stated, this is a much older ...

Thanks so much, MiRaCLeS! :) I appreciate that!

Thank you, ShadowKnight155 and cali34rniasummer! Your feedback is most appreciated! :)

Thanks, neonspeeddemon! I actually NEVER thought that this piece would get published, as it is a very personal piece of mine! But hey, life is unexpected, right?