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Re: The Light and the Dark
Thank you! I'm glad it resonated. I was mostly trying to find ways to express and understand some feeling so I wasn't sure if would flow well or even work ...
Dec 9, 2023 -
Re: A Handful of Stars
Aww thank you! The line you're highlighting is taken from a headline "People watch in wonder as...", So it's sort of a conflict between what's being said and what the ...
Nov 29, 2023 -
Re: The Light and the Dark
Thank you, I'm glad it resonated!
Nov 27, 2023 -
Re: The Light and the Dark
Thanks for the kind words. I surprised myself with it!
Nov 27, 2023 -
Re: Oh, Moon
I used to stay up late and have feelings of intense sorrow. I used to find the moon out my window (and the other planets when they appear bright in ...
Nov 23, 2023 -
Re: What Your Words Taught Me
What a beautifully written poem, I thought it deserved a comment on top of the like. There's some really powerful lines in here... I especially love: I am a symphony ...
Nov 22, 2023 -
Re: The Old Man And The Boy - Epilogue
Sorry reading late at night again and I just read some of the flow and grammar in that review. %uD83E%uDD23
Aug 25, 2023 -
Re: Doodlebug
This is part of that thing I told you about seeing ridiculousness in everything. How when things are bad, seeing how ridiculous everything is makes you realise somehow it's not ...
Aug 22, 2023 -
Re: Doodlebug
This is part of that thing I told you about seeing ridiculousness in everything. How when things are bad, seeing how ridiculous everything is makes you realise somehow it's not ...
Aug 22, 2023 -
Re: The Old Man And The Boy 2
So actually I feel like this follow up gives a lot more context. Unfortunately I'm tired and don't have time to dig deep, but I am hopefully going to remember ...
Aug 21, 2023 -
Re: Christmas Wishes
I just came back here because I was discussing writing with my bf and told him I used to write as an outlet as a teen... I've been having a ...
Aug 21, 2023 -
Re: Guardian Angel
Haha, thanks for the reviews! I am still a bit torn about what to do with this, part of me wants to take out the middle section and replace it ...
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: Blood River
LOL! I just got back from being AWOL and came here from a critique on one of my stories...But that has to be the most amusing thing I've read for ...
Jun 13, 2009 -
Re: A Fairytale Beginning
In England it's metre xP Yeah, thanks for the advice, I think I'm not very good at the whole romance thing, but I'm going to try and make it reasonable ...
Oct 9, 2008 -
Re: Holding Out For A Hero Part One
Yup. No lives. And we get points for posting! :wink: Good luck getting acquainted to the site, I may end up critting more of your works in the future! :)
Feb 13, 2008
