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  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Light and the Dark

    Thank you! I'm glad it resonated. I was mostly trying to find ways to express and understand some feeling so I wasn't sure if would flow well or even work ...

    Dec 9, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Technology Re: A Handful of Stars

    Aww thank you! The line you're highlighting is taken from a headline "People watch in wonder as...", So it's sort of a conflict between what's being said and what the ...

    Nov 29, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Light and the Dark

    Thank you, I'm glad it resonated!

    Nov 27, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Light and the Dark

    Thanks for the kind words. I surprised myself with it!

    Nov 27, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: Oh, Moon

    I used to stay up late and have feelings of intense sorrow. I used to find the moon out my window (and the other planets when they appear bright in ...

    Nov 23, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: What Your Words Taught Me

    What a beautifully written poem, I thought it deserved a comment on top of the like. There's some really powerful lines in here... I especially love: I am a symphony ...

    Nov 22, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Other Re: The Old Man And The Boy - Epilogue

    Sorry reading late at night again and I just read some of the flow and grammar in that review. %uD83E%uDD23

    Aug 25, 2023
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Doodlebug

    This is part of that thing I told you about seeing ridiculousness in everything. How when things are bad, seeing how ridiculous everything is makes you realise somehow it's not ...

    Aug 22, 2023
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Doodlebug

    This is part of that thing I told you about seeing ridiculousness in everything. How when things are bad, seeing how ridiculous everything is makes you realise somehow it's not ...

    Aug 22, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Old Man And The Boy 2

    So actually I feel like this follow up gives a lot more context. Unfortunately I'm tired and don't have time to dig deep, but I am hopefully going to remember ...

    Aug 21, 2023
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Christmas Wishes

    I just came back here because I was discussing writing with my bf and told him I used to write as an outlet as a teen... I've been having a ...

    Aug 21, 2023
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Guardian Angel

    Haha, thanks for the reviews! I am still a bit torn about what to do with this, part of me wants to take out the middle section and replace it ...

    Jun 16, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Blood River

    LOL! I just got back from being AWOL and came here from a critique on one of my stories...But that has to be the most amusing thing I've read for ...

    Jun 13, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: A Fairytale Beginning

    In England it's metre xP Yeah, thanks for the advice, I think I'm not very good at the whole romance thing, but I'm going to try and make it reasonable ...

    Oct 9, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Holding Out For A Hero Part One

    Yup. No lives. And we get points for posting! :wink: Good luck getting acquainted to the site, I may end up critting more of your works in the future! :)

    Feb 13, 2008


I'm tired of books having villains who are just villains for no reason.
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