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Thank you! I'm glad it resonated. I was mostly trying to find ways to express and understand some feeling so I wasn't sure if would flow well or even work ...

Aww thank you! The line you're highlighting is taken from a headline "People watch in wonder as...", So it's sort of a conflict between what's being said and what the ...

Thank you, I'm glad it resonated!

Thanks for the kind words. I surprised myself with it!

I used to stay up late and have feelings of intense sorrow. I used to find the moon out my window (and the other planets when they appear bright in ...

Sorry reading late at night again and I just read some of the flow and grammar in that review. %uD83E%uDD23

This is part of that thing I told you about seeing ridiculousness in everything. How when things are bad, seeing how ridiculous everything is makes you realise somehow it's not ...

This is part of that thing I told you about seeing ridiculousness in everything. How when things are bad, seeing how ridiculous everything is makes you realise somehow it's not ...

So actually I feel like this follow up gives a lot more context. Unfortunately I'm tired and don't have time to dig deep, but I am hopefully going to remember ...

I just came back here because I was discussing writing with my bf and told him I used to write as an outlet as a teen... I've been having a ...

Haha, thanks for the reviews! I am still a bit torn about what to do with this, part of me wants to take out the middle section and replace it ...

LOL! I just got back from being AWOL and came here from a critique on one of my stories...But that has to be the most amusing thing I've read for ...

In England it's metre xP Yeah, thanks for the advice, I think I'm not very good at the whole romance thing, but I'm going to try and make it reasonable ...

Yup. No lives. And we get points for posting! :wink: Good luck getting acquainted to the site, I may end up critting more of your works in the future! :)

I always go up to the first post and edit that... ...That way if more people come along to crit, they are critting the improved piece, rather than picking up ...