Pixielit

i don't know what the others are talking about. I think it works great as a song. i had a bit of a tune in my head as i read ...

nothing to criticize, i just wanted to tell you I really liked this. it reminded me of a couple books i've read, just how some characters are so hesitant and ...

Aha! So I was right.... wasn't I? Is Eric in that same place? I liked this chapter. Renee seems very reluctant to go to this place, and it seemed like ...

I liked this... I didn't read the original, so I can't offer feedback on whether this version was better or not. I feel sort of like I was thrown into ...