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Re: The House
WOW this is Really good. There's not much else i can say. #Queen of the Pirates#
May 14, 2007 -
Re: Nameless Poem
I liked your poem it flowed nicely and i was able to paint a picture in my head. I'm no poet so i can't really critique it and i have ...
Mar 21, 2007 -
Re: Bittersweet
I loved it! there were a few typos, but it flowed nicely. Are going to post more? I'm dying to know what happens next. #Queen of the Pirates#
Mar 19, 2007 -
Re: Angels in the City
I really liked your story. I didn't see any typos. I'm aweful at grammar so i can't say anything about that hehe. excellent work #Queen of the Priates#
Mar 15, 2007 -
Re: Innocent Love
actually uncorrupt is a word, but untaint isn't. That's why i had to put untainted. #Queen of the Pirates#
Mar 15, 2007 -
Re: Himdil
Excellent! I have no idea how you can think in old english, but it's great. #Queen of the Pirates#
Mar 14, 2007 -
Re: Not sure what it is
hehe yes i meant pen not pin oops #Queen of the Pirates#
Mar 14, 2007 -
Re: The Ballad of John Henry's Hammer
I liked it and like the others can't really find anything wrong with it. Well done #Queen of the Pirates#
Mar 13, 2007 -
Re: Innocent Love
Hey everyone please feel free to critique and comment. Thanks! #Queen of the Pirates#
Mar 12, 2007 -
Re: Imaginary Me
I really like it and it's so true. Keep up the good work #Queen of the Pirates#
Mar 12, 2007 -
Re: Breathing
I loved it. Other than the few spelling errors i really enjoyed it. Personally I liked the title. #Queen of the Pirates#
Mar 12, 2007
