Published March 11, 2007
I’m looking for completeness,
Trying to find what cannot be,
I’m trying to find reason,
In this cold reality,
And every time I see the sun,
A cloud moves over me,
I’m searching,
For a life I cannot lead,
I’m holding on,
To a dream I cannot see,
And all I know,
Is that I cannot let go,
Of this imaginary me.
Why can’t I just give this up,
Let go of my fantasies,
Every-time I reach too far,
I fall out of these dreams,
And every-time I see the sun,
A cloud moves over me,
I’m searching,
For a life I cannot lead,
I’m holding on,
To a dream I cannot see,
And all I know,
Is that I cannot let go,
Of this Imaginary me,
And every time I see the sun,
A cloud moves over me,
I’ve tried to catch a star before,
Chased after moonbeams,
What is this hope I cannot touch,
But is everything I need.
I’m searching,
For a life I cannot lead,
I’m holding on,
To a dream that cannot be,
And all I know,
Is I don’t feel like letting go,
Of this Imaginary me,
No I don’t think I’ll let go,
Of this imaginary me.
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I love the way you've done this. It really works. I'm off to sign your guest book now, Bkwrm.
I really like it and it's so true. Keep up the good work
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