Pippiedooda

Hi Gladius! :D Sorry I took so long, chat distracts me :oops: I have read the first chapter and am reviewing that now before moving to the next, and I ...

Hi :) I thought this was a really good introduction! I can't see much that could be changed but if I am being really picky then there were a couple ...

Hi :D sorry I took a while to review! This story just keeps getting better and better! The pale, dead moon shone impertinently down on me; the thin slivers of ...

Hi :D I thought seeing as you were reading through my work I'd repay the favour! I know this was posted ages ago but I thought I'd take a look ...

Hi Armagan :D Yay! You posted it! I like this part, I felt so sorry for her :( I agree with the points Lucy has made but have some more ...

Hi! :) I enjoyed this part! That evil writers block *shakes fist angrily* I am suffering from it a bit at the moment myself :( Still this is a great ...

Hi again :D Thanks for the PM! Just to let you know I am really enjoying this so far- I want to find out what happens next! I love how ...

Hi :D Sorry it took me so long! Wow Dreamwalker has covered a lot :shock: I think she picked out a lot of the punctuation mistakes (something I am generally ...

Hi again! :D I like how you have continued and the introduction of a new character, things are getting interesting! Time for my second last day of school. This doesn't ...

Hi :) seeing as you were talking about your story on chat the other night I thought I'd check it out! I wasn't disappointed either, I think you have written ...

Hi again :D Nice cliffhanger! This story has me more and more interested, I hope you carry on with it :) "Why, you're so welcome, Mae! It's so nice to ...

Hi again :) This was even sadder than the one before! :( I can't believe you managed this in ten minutes though :shock: Its really well written! It had only ...

Hi :D I like this idea! I haven't read anything on here about hauntings so it was interesting to go over this piece, I think you start well too. Generally ...

Hi :D I didn't read your first piece originally but I thought this seemed really good! Sad so far though :( I'm definitely curious as to the reasons behind all ...

Hi :D You always take the time to read my story so I thought I would return the favour! This is a well written piece, its kind of strange but ...