Piper

draaxy-pants! Here for a review! I liked this concept, it was funny, but you seem to not have all your puncuation down. Periods where commas should be, or awkward spacing ...

I think you used beautiful imagry, it was very well written. Just tell me he doesn't die....the helicopter saves him, right? It's right there, he just falls asleep, right? Well, ...

This was great! Sad, I almost cried. One thing though, Still a few sobs wracked my body as I remembered the death of my parents and my three year old ...

Dark hair swaying like seaweed A Siren sits perched on a rock Shrouded in a fine mist She opens her mouth to sing(opens her mouth sounds a little weird to ...

You are a cruel, cruel person Pointe. Cliff hanger, really? There was a few mistakes. no capitals, a wrong letter, but I don't feel like going into that now. I ...

I have arrived!! I am really enjoying the magi, and this probably won't be a long review because I want to read chapter 8... I agree that they kind of ...

Yay Luxy!!! This was awesome, and now I don't have to murder you. But I AM going to murder Asher. The one thing I think you should change is take ...

This is adorable. I love it. The only thing don't get is the American Dolls. Those things are EXPENSIVE. And they don't seem like a rich family. That was really ...

This was really good, I love the way its written. There was only one thing that felt choppy to me The Moon shimmers, Calling the song we have Forgotten. I ...

Here I am, as promised. I really liked this story, it was sad and I nearly cried at the end. I think it may have been more what I think ...

Hi! it's me again. I really liked this two, it seemed very real. The characters are very three-dimentional and they have personalities. Thats really good since your only on your ...

Hey, I'm sak's and I will be your reviewer today. I really liked this piece, it's very light, which I think everyone needs at some point. I'm not sure if ...

Hey K! I just have to say, I couldn't agree more. I have complained about this so many times. Ella Enchanted is one, Princess Diaries is another, Eragon and Percy ...

Ok, I thought this was really cute. But why did you use the name Ryan twice? The guy from here's name was Ryan, and the guy from her star story's ...

I am two different coal miners....great-grand daugher? You know I have family in WV. Anyway, I really like this poem. I'm not very good at reviewing poetry, I just wanted ...