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Re: The Pirate Queen: Chapter 8
Hey Aurora! I better get to this before I forget! I think you have had a good continuation to the story, but there’s a few things I want to poke ...
May 21, 2014 -
Re: The Pirate Queen: Chapter 7
Hey Aurora! I've read this through quite a number of times, and haven't found much to quibble about. It's nice to see that the accent on the Ryder persona is ...
May 17, 2014 -
Re: Endless Descent [Part7]
Hmm ok. What did I say I was going to do about your chapter? Plot. Yes plot. When I read this novel, it's as though you chronicle the lives of ...
May 17, 2014 -
Re: Endless Descent [Part6]
Noms Tenyo! I am here! At last! One thing. Losty hasn’t told me I can review her work, she said to hold till she says not to hold, so I’m ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: The Pirate Queen: Chapter 6
Hey Aurora! I’m here for your review! Finally~! I have one thing I want to poke you on before we move into the more meaty parts of the review. At ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: Endless Descent [Part 5]
Warning: review is rated 18+ for innuendo. Hi haw! I'm finally here! I've read the piece over, so I believe I am qualified to make a judgement call about the ...
Apr 30, 2014 -
Re: The Pirate Queen: Chapter 5
Hey Aurora! Hopefully I can finish this review before the end of review day. I generally take a minimum of three hours on these types of review. Even though this ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Escape From Rainbowland Chapter 4
Losty! I'm glad I made time to review this piece. I might have been hard pressed for time otherwise :/ I like also that it is short. Time for a ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Devil Touch Prologue (New)
Sushiwooshi!! Alright here as requested! (I do use alright too often!) As promised, a full review. Firstly I'll talk a little about it overall. The tone of this piece is ...
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: The Pirate Queen: Chapter 4
Warning: read with caution!!!! Hey Aurora. Here again! I have been exhausted reviewing Tenyo, and I should probably wait a day or so, but in dying of boredom and have ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: Endless Descent [Part 4]
Tenyo!!! I'm back! I order you to appreciate this. I took about four plus hours on it. Alright first of all im going to give an overview of this piece. ...
Apr 19, 2014 -
Re: Escape From Rainbowland Chapter 3
I'm going to go point by point where I dislike what or how you write. Call me a sour lemon, this work is great. I am bad on praises, as ...
Apr 16, 2014 -
Re: Unromantic
I read "romance" and immediately thought "cheesy stuff." Right now I'm undecided though. Is it? Is it not? My heart has mushified. When I first began reading, I wondered why ...
Apr 16, 2014 -
Re: Endless Descent [Part 3]
Now, tenny. Pieses here for saging!! If you're late can't I be late too? :p just kidding! On with the review. I'm just going to slack on you again and ...
Apr 13, 2014 -
Re: The Pirate Queen: Chapter 3
Hey aurora!! Sorry for saging so late in the week!! About this piece. First off I like the tension and non-tension mix. There's a lot of the former and a ...
Apr 13, 2014
