PickledChrissy

Thanks for the review! I never really though of it like that, but, yeah, it kinda does zigzag. :D

Thanks, good luck to you as well!

Thanks for the review! I always have trouble keeping the flow for the entire poem, I'll try and work on it. :D

I don't review poetry that much, but I will say that I loved this work! :D

It sounds like you have one fun little brother! :D

Wow! Thanks for the the review! I can tell you spent a lot of time on it. :D Yeah, I know that a lot of this work was clunky. I'll ...

This is your first poem? It's awesome! :D

Btw, you are not required to change your poem if you don't agree.

Thanks, Annie! Nyx isn't there very long. He only last a chapter or two. :( Shame too, I kinda like him. But I will try and liven him up a ...

I like that. Cool! :D

Thanks, Marcy! I will find a different way to start it, and fix the mile of description. Do you have any suggestion for how it could begin?

You don't need to clarify! You already did in the review! :D

Thanks for the review! Yeah, I think you're right. I'll be editing that mile of description. Do you have any suggestion for how I could start it?

This is incredible. :D

Her playing isn't weird. I was just making sure you had meant for it too be normal. :D