Pickle810

I've edited it, and further critiques are not only welcome, they're begged for. To answer some questions: spirits means alchohol. It's just a fancy way of saying it. Also, the ...

Thanks for the critiques guys! I'll edit it ASAp (I'm using the free computer in the hotel lobby right now), and I promise I'll take it all into consideration! A ...

Hi! Okay, friends over right now, and they're using spare comp. to type some semblence of a critique, which I'll PM to you. Bye!

Thanks for the reviews! I've got another part written, so I'll probably post it this weekend if I'm not too busy!

Not that there's anything really wrong, but, why doesn't anyone oppose the keeping the baby option? It just seems like it'd be more natural that way. That's all I have ...

everyone's already said what there is to say about the edit, but I'll put my bit in anyway! Love Aurora, she's not the typical boring princess who requires rescuing, and ...

Thanks! Anybody else reading this, feel free to crit. I can't decide whether or not I want to continue this storyline.

Uh, cool prologue! I'm not sure what the thing with the magicians is about, but then again, prologues are for leaving questions so that you read more to get answers! ...

My brother read them first, and while I didn't love them, they were a passable read for a rainy weekend. Or an airplane. But Garth Nix, Tolkein, and Dave Barry ...

Interesting poem. I like the perspective, although I'm sad to say my Daddy would too. (anti-relationship before 35 much?), but your poem's just really good. Although you do seem to ...

That was pretty good. It seemed sort of like a bizzare African retelling of the Three Little Pigs, but with monkeys and tigers instead. It also sort of seemed like ...

Loved it. Somehow the slightly cynical and sarcastic tone reminds me of a good friend of mine, which makes me feel as though I'm really seeing the story from Emma's ...

Did you base this partly on the book "City of Ember"? The plot seems similar.

Well, I know it's certainly been a while since you wrote this story, but I'd like to let you know that I really like it. It sort of feels like ...

I loved the story. The ending seems a little chopped off, and I'd like to have a little more detail, but this has got the makings of a good short ...