Phoenixwhisper

Hello, First off, great prologue to your story, I cant wait to read more!! I love your use of language and imagery and I think it works great in setting ...

Hello there, Overall I really like this piece and it has a great message behind the story. I like how you ended it with him being so close from the ...

Hello, phoenixwhisper here to review! First off, I really like this piece and love the concept and emotion in it, so great job there! You did a great job in ...

Hello there, phoenixwhisper her to review! Ok, first off, I quite enjoyed this piece and your use of humor. I love the idea of [insert --- here] and how you ...

hello there, pheonixwhisper here to review :) First of, I really like the concept of seeing the story from the point of view of the damsel in distress as well ...