Phoenix23

This is a very powerful poem. It captured my interest right from the beginning. The imagery is so good you can almost feel the trauma and the pain the person ...

Aj, I hope you will hold on, best of luck and best wishes.

Fine piece of writing. Everything is almost flawless. The theme is captured quite well.

Good poem and funny too. The things we come up during class......... keep going!

A really thoughtful piece. Yeah most of us would want to see those happy carefree days come back, when life was innocent. I like it..... Keep going :)

The idea is good but you need to work on the composition of the poem. Its good to organize the poem in stanzas. Also you should avoid using the abbreviations.

Good work. I can relate myself to it. Being lost and alone.......... and knowing that there are no guiding stars along the way..... keep going :)

Its a very good poem.Touched me really. Keep going!

Hey Mikko thanks for the corrections. It will sure help me in the future. :)

I like the theme of the poem. Being different, being a "freak" is not an easy thing. But those who are should be proud because they took the "less traveled ...