Phoenix

Thanks for the comments and advice everyone :D Sorry about the format of the text being hard to read.. I clicked on the 'Pre' thing which says will reserve the ...

hey, aww thankyou very much for the comments Aedomir :D I will continue writing if I can in between all my school deadlines (gah!) :s

thanks snoink and jasmine. :]

Great poem! I really enjoyed reading this ;] I can't think of anything else to say that hasn't already been said, sooo good job!

What did you do, read the poem to a spider and it keeled over and died? :shock: Anyway great poem! great sense of emotion..

The poem doesn't flow perfectly, but apart from that I thought it was rather good, and very relatable :]