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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Invitations: Prologue (2/2)

    Hey! Thanks for keeping me posted! Well, here goes. :) In retrospect , that indeed was the strangest part to Freeda’s story. carriage or on foot and each time there ...

    Jul 13, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Invitations: Prologue (1/2)

    Hey! Basket here! Sorry it took so long... but I'm here now! Yay! So, lets get started, shall we? But these invitations, unlike the usual ones one might receive , ...

    Jul 12, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Green Revolution

    Hello! Basket here to review your piece today, I hope you don't mind. :) Before I start things off, I want to welcome you to YWS! You're really going to ...

    Jul 2, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Carnival: Chapter One

    Hello! Basket here to review your work today, I hope you don't mind! Okay, so, my corrections/what I will be correcting will be in bold within the quotation boxes. Sound ...

    Jul 2, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Fickle Finger of Fate

    Hello! Baset here to review your piece today, I hope you don't mind! Okay, so, first thing's first. I review as I read, so if I mention something that's later ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Thing

    Hello! Basket here to review your piece today, I hope you don't mind! Okay, so, firs thing's first. I review as i read, so if I mention something that's reveiled ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Light Blue Eyes - Chapter 1

    Hey! Basket here to critique your work today, I hope you don't mind! Okay, so, my corrections/what I will be correcting will be in bold within the cool quotation boxes ...

    Jun 29, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Soulless [Chapter Three, Part 2]

    Hello! Basket here! Thanks so much for PMming me! Really! I couldn't wait for this part to come out and I'm glad it came out so fast. :D So, same ...

    Jun 29, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Soulless [Chapter Three, Part 1]

    Hey! Basket here once again! Sorry, saw this and thought, OMG I have to read it! Anyhoo, I review the same way as before. If you don't remember, I'm sure ...

    Jun 29, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Dancing Bones

    Hello! Basket here to critique your piece for today, I hope you don't mind. Okay, my corrections/what I will be correcting are going to be in bold within the cool ...

    Jun 29, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: (Oh-so-short) Preface of my untitled novel.

    Hey! Basket here to critique your work today, I hope you don't mind. Okay, well, my corrections/what I will be correcting is going to be in bold within the quotation ...

    Jun 29, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A conspiracy

    Hey! Basket here and I will be reviewing your piece today, I hope you don't mind! Okay, the things I corrected/will be correcting are in bold within the quotation boxes ...

    Jun 27, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Bride

    Hey! Basket here! I'm going to review your piece today, I hope you don't mind! I review as i read, so if I mention something that's later explained in the ...

    Jun 26, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Inkheart Seris

    Urgh, I had to wait forever for inkdeath, it drove me insane. I finally got it after about three months or something ridiculous like that... v- VERY major spoiler if ...

    Jun 26, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Hunger Games

    Well, when I picked it up at the library, it sounded interesting so I got it. It was interesting, no doubt about that, and a good read. I just didn't ...

    Jun 26, 2009


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