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Re: Summer Will Suck.
Hellõ there, it's Pervy here. This was a good, solid piece of writing. I noticed no faults in the grammar section, and throughoutly enjoyed it. I'm sure every teenager can ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Are you rejecting me?
Hey there, Pervy here! I enjoyed this poem, and there's nothing too exceptional that I could say of it. It was cheerful to read, which is always fun. Now, for ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: In Memoriam - Part III: Innocent Bystanders
Hey there, Pervy here. I totally forgot to continue reading this, since I held a long break from writing. I seriously loved this, it was very emotional and the storyline ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: .
Hey there, Pervy here! To start off, this was a great story. Despite that i'm about to collapse from sleep loss, I managed to read it through (unlike 98% of ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: My Princess
Hey, Pervy here! I absolutely love this poem! It's like a puzzle with all the pieces perfectly in order. You're really talented, it can't be denied. You made everything rhyme ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Omnipotent
Hey, Pervy here. Wonderful work, that's it =). Sorry, but I can't complain about it at all, except for a few nitpicks I spotted (I have the eyes of a ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: We never were
Hey, Pervy here. I really liked this story, i'm quite sure almost everyone have had a similar situation at a certain moment of their lives (or yet to experience it?). ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: The Break-in
Hey, it's Pervy here. This story was good and you described the events well. It just left me wondering that the average man would beat the s*it out of you ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Homemade Devil
Hey, Pervy here. Onto the review: You might be using the word "you" too much in the first and last part. It sounds pretty blunt when you read it out ...
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: A short story: Bartolome
Hey, Pervy here. I noticed at the first glimpse that the work is full of spelling errors, but don't fret! Start each word in a title with a capital letter. ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Casting shadows
Hey, Pervy here. This poem was good, first I tried guessing a bat, until I continued reading and found out that it's white, has hollow eyes and circles the moon. ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: The Passing Time
Hey, Pervy here. I have to admit that poems aren't really my expertise, but I can tell apart the "good" and "bad" ones. This one falls into the category of ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Nobles and Beggars *Part 1*
Hey there lad, Pervy here. I enjoyed reading this, you described the characters and their actions splendedly, and I got a good idea of the scenery as well. Onto the ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: The Lies Disney Told Me
Hey, Pervy here. I totally see your point and where you're going with this, it is--at least partially true. The wonderous Disney movies lack to take in the account that ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: The Unfortunate Event of a Disillusioned Knight
An excellent text indeed. The namings of the characters and the way you described the events really cracked me up. There were some minor spelling errors (I'm quite sure the ...
Jan 4, 2011
