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  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: sky tipped words

    So good! I love how the first few stanzas are all similar (listing words then ending with the same line "these words remind me of ____") because it makes it ...

    Nov 8, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: We Weather the Seasons

    Hi, Spearmint! Poetry is my favorite to read, and ur work is no exception! It simultaneously possess the calm, comforting feeling inherent to any nature poem but it’s also accompanied ...

    Dec 8, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Narrative Re: Reflecting Hearts - Ch. 1.3 - Balancing on a Tightrope

    Ok, I’m back! So far my favorite aspects of the story are the characters! You’ve done a great job introducing several supporting characters with the perfect amount of information! Even ...

    Dec 7, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Reflecting Hearts - Prologue

    Hi! I wasn’t sure what to expect going into this, especially since I’m a new member (just joined today actually!), but I was really moved by the emotion already present ...

    Dec 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: The Language of Rain

    It’s so beautiful and whimsical 😊 I love the soft feel of all your description, especially in the lines “The sky weeps it’s wisdom, and the earth listens.” It so ...

    Dec 7, 2023


Poetry is like a bird, it ignores all frontiers.
— Yevgeny Yevtushenko