Percybeth

Great job with this. I didn't plan on commenting because I thought you did a fantastic job, (and I still do :p ) here's why I actually did: at the ...

Even though it was just three lines, the ending was such a plot twist toward what I was expecting to read. I thought it was going to be some confident ...

MysteryMe, I really like how intense this poem got. There was so much emotion. Instead of feeling like the "I", I felt as though I was amongst the "they". I ...

Wow, I've never been through a divorce, but this makes it sound like you're worst nightmare. A lot of emotion and sound, I really like that. Here's something I would ...

Wow, I really loved the ending to this story. While I was reading this, I was just thinking that it would be a poem where he died and in the ...

Hey, this was a really cute poem and I just want to bookmark the link to it because I fill like whenever I am sad or lost, I can just ...

The title of your poem caught my attention! :) Gabby, I really enjoyed reading this. For each time I read "slowly it melts" I actually got excited caused wanted to ...

These are some things that i noticed in your story that kind of got under my skin: First, I think you used "and" a lot. Especially when there was dialogue ...

As I was thinking about this more I realized that this really is great because, in my experience, it seems like Christians and Catholics look down on rappers because all ...