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Thank you ! I aim for simple. I just couldn't think of what else I could add without straying from the main point, I wasn't too satisfied with the ending ...

I'm glad it wasn't confusing at all, I aim for simple. Thank you for reviewing. (: I wonder what his side of the story is too, he could never really ...

Thank you so much for the constructive criticism ! I wasn't sure how to include the punctuation last night, I'll go fix that now.

Thank you very much ! I actually did write it for someone.

Thank you so much ! This is my first poem in a long time, I'm glad you liked it.

I think I fixed most of those problems just now. That "orantabby" typo isn't showing up on my computer. ._. Strange. And, I've owned a tabby that was quite orange. ...