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Hello SilloriaD! I'm here to review your piece, so let's get straight into it, I had to look up the meaning of 'Magickians' because of the use of the word, ...

Welcome to Young Writers Society! Overall a pretty good poem, but there are a few issues that I'm going to talk about... First of all - grammar and punctuation 'Why ...

Hello DemonGoddess! The fact that you 'apparently' wrote this in five minutes, maybe it was a timed exercise, is very impressive. Alot of people have taken the words right out ...

Hello TheLeakyPen, Your pen obviously didn't leak much when writing this short story, but like they always say - quality over quantity, and this is no exception. It's obviously going ...

I'd first like to point out the stupidity of some ratings on YWS, you're probably familiar with this but I think it's unhelpful to put an exaggerated rating on a ...

Hello Unidentified, A quick review for a quick piece of work... First of all there are a few grammatical errors in the poem, I'm going to assume that they were ...

Hi Kyllorac, Overall I would say this is good for a short piece, it was easy to follow and understandable. I'm not one of those people who complain when a ...

Hi there gxldencrxwns! Being as your short story is a 'short' piece of work compared to others, I won't have much feedback to give you and may not say anything ...

Hi there! Glad to be the very first to review this piece of work. Overall I would say this is short and compulsive, I especially like the way you used ...

Hello ashpandas, After reading this piece of poetry it's clear to me that writing about deep emotions and thoughts is your thing - and I respect that. The intention of ...

Hello Rodger, I think this short story is pretty good, with a strong connection to the narrator's thoughts and feelings. I'm usually not a fan of romantic pieces but am ...

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