Penlorde

Thank you, i'll keep that in mind for future work.

Hey :) Thank you for the review. These were some things I completely overlooked. I'm horrible at the nitpicks but I will make the changes :D And I'll try to ...

Hello :D Thanks for the review! I'm sorry I made her too perfect, I'll fix that ish, when I'm free. Also, I live under a rock, Who's Mary Sue? but ...

Oh hello again :D THANK YOU! This is great. We can keep creeping each other. Thank you thank you. :D

Your definitely good at this stuff. Oh, and goo easy on me.. XD

Read your other work. Your really good. I'm deco going to be hanging around your portfolio from now :D

Clap for the girl who spoke her mind. This is work. Straightforward, see-through. A sneak-peak into your world. Thank for this piece. I'm going to be watching you from now ...

Oh good, You don't hate me. YAY! I was scared I was too harsh after submitting. Sorry again!

wowowowowowwoowow. This is gooooood. XD DONT CHANGE IT IS PERFECT. ILOVEITLOVEITLOVEIT. Very raw, very real! Your a very talented writer, keep writing PLEASE. I'm not good at poetry but this ...

Thanks for being honest :)

Thats deep. Thank you.

Hahaha

Oh wow. Thank you :)

Hello :) It's a weird mix, I agree. Thank you!

Its's not a poem, but then again i'm not quite sure what it is myself. Thank You though, I love to get feedback :DD