PenguinAttack

Hey hun, I suck, I suck, I suck. I know. NaNo completely stole everything from me so it's been forever since I could get to this. But I'm doing it ...

Hi, Arashi , It’s lovely to meet you! To begin I have a bit of a line by line and then I’ll make more general comments. ^^ Here we go: ...

Hello there, Lord Anzius. I’ll do what I can to critique this to a good standard, but I can’t promise to critique other chapters, between university, work, and NaNo, I’m ...

Isn’t she gorgeous? The Raven? I mean... she’s just such a sweet and lovely being, definitely. I feel as though Morley feels for her, though he doesn’t show it quite ...

I'm terribly sorry this is so late, I've been a little behind on everything lately. I'm definitely enjoying this, beyond what I thought I would, to be honest. You're writing ...

Hullo, Moonglowe! I don’t believe I’ve met you before, and I see you’re fairly new, so welcome to the YWS. Feel free to ask me – or any moderator – ...

I believe I told you that I think this is wonderful. ^^ I do, it's not conventional in one sense - because of the direct and slightly formal speech, the ...

I held time in my hands and would not let it go. My cold hands imprisoned the golden force. I felt his pleading call and witnessed < This is just ...

How delightfully odd! I like this, quite a bit. It’s certainly both interesting and well written. I do have some issues with it, but I’ll start with what I like. ...

Okay! So, I decided the best idea would be to go through this one flash piece at a time, aye. I think you might hate me by the end, though. ...

Hola Olivia. ^^ I’m glad you Pm’d me about this; otherwise I’d not have seen it and all. You’ve had some good critiques before me (Whatever do you even need ...

Hey Athena! I felt the blood rolling down my face onto the floor where I was currently laid out with his foot on my chest. This is very awkward, there’s ...

Hello, Ember! Welcome to the YWS, as I’ve not yet met you. ^^ Hope you’re liking it here. Now, onto the piece itself. Even as a prologue, this is rather ...

Hey, Boy! I’m commenting on this because I remembered you were writing it. xD *gets distracted* Well now. You have so much opportunity here, Boy. Really, it’s a right well ...

Kylan! Yes, I do have experience with this form. Well, kind of, I suppose. xD Sadly enough, I’d written something for the contest in this exact form too. ^^ I’ll ...