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Semyonova BAM. I love this. I gushed to you in PM in chat about how much I love this. Against the other poems in your thread now it runs equal ...

Jars of Stars That night, you brought down < There is something about how many words/the words used here that is a little stilted for me, not sure what it ...

Hi! It seems like you've done something pretty brave here; you've attempted to branch out into the world of prose poetry. Why do I label this as brave? Because not ...

Okay Lum, I'm here as pleasantly arranged. I like the poem and I love some of your expressions - particularly the smoking aces - and you clearly have talent with ...

Hi Gally. Sorry if this review doesn't make sense/ is a little lacking, I've current got a cold and my thought process isn't the most comprehensive. I want to know ...

Dear Anarchy, your buildings are burning. your razors are melting, < Capitalise the Y here. labeling a message, that cut me deep, < I don’t think you need “labeling a” ...

You Edited! So, I'm going to give you another review and put my old one in a spoiler. I don't want to get rid of it entirely, because you may ...

Hi Era! This is much better than the other one I read. Mainly, I feel, because this one has more substance. I felt something here, while reading this - it ...

My heavens, I love you. xD This is amazing, and I'm so very, very jealous that the first piece of work I see from you in the year is far ...

Hullo again, Kylan! I know just a moment ago (in review times, anyway) I said that hispaniola was my favourite by you right now. This hasn't changed, but this poem ...

Hi Kylan! I really liked this. I'd go as far as to say this is my favourite from you in a little while. Most particularly because I could feel emotion, ...

Jon! You didn't tell me you'd written this! I love this, really. I love how it progresses, and the terms you use. I love how it flows and I just ...

Haha, I like this! It made me smile, which is always awesome. I love the words you've used - sinew and such - and the way your poem progresses. Some ...

Hi there! I like this poem quite a bit, I love the subject matter and simple way which you've chosen to approach it. However, I do have some suggestions for ...

Hi there! I love how much emotion you have in this poem, it practically smacks you in the face the moment you start reading. Often emotion is something that poetry ...