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Hi Versatile! Okay, did you run this through a spell check or try editing this before you posted it at all? This has a bevy of issues which mainly stem ...

Hi Prettyface! Thanks for posting this, I prefer getting a look at poems in the crisp space of the page, there's something different in reading it here to a pad. ...

Hi there! So I see why this is in humour, although I've gone ahead and stamped a little rating on the top of it just for the language and for ...

NO. Oh Farah nooo. No. :( I just knew you'd do this to me, Hannahbobannah. I just KNEW she would give in to Gautam, even if this isn't giving in. ...

Hannahbobannah! You posted these as though a secret! I love it, again. I knew this boy was bad, I knew you were bad, Aaron! Oh Gautam, why can't you just ...

Hi there! So I've only reviewed the prologue for now, you'll probably do better posting these in chapters on the site, if you're looking for some strong feedback. Your characters ...

Hi there! So this is probably the first WoW fanfic I have ever read, and it wasn’t bad! You have some issues going on here, and I’ll talk about them ...

Hi Questio! I'm sorry about the surgery to your hand! The worst thing is when you can't write for whatever reason. I'm going to ignore those connected words since you ...

Spinelli, You kid are modern gold. What even can we do with your beatnik prowess when you show us this, but snap. I'll let my avatar do all my snapping ...

Hi BookLover! This is a super short part of a chapter! We don't get to see much or learn much about what's going on, really. By the end I feel ...

Hola Gummie, Trident has already given you an epic review, so I'll try to follow up with some solid comments of my own. Firstly, this poem definitely isn't terrible! I've ...

Hi HH, I wasn't sure where this story was going! I definitely thought it was going to turn out alright in the end, despite the title! I think you did ...

Hey Kafka, It's nice to read some poetry from you after that delightfully odd pun run! Your first line is mega awkward for me at the moment, the rhythm is ...

Hey Audster, So I literally Lol'd at your end line because it surprised me no end. Is the mixture of poems between the italics and the not? Because I agree ...

Hi Miss Bethy! The fourth of what you’ve posted! Yaay! To begin, I think “Throughout” would work much better than “All through” here because the rhythm of that sticks, and ...