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Hi Jalmoc! Nice to see you posting some poetry for us to chomp on! I think the rhyme pattern you have going is an interesting one. Having the rhyme only ...

Hi aionicbonds! Your name is hard to type somehow! It is a good name though, welcome to the YWS and I hope you're having a good time here! A good ...

=Hi Over Diffusely! I like this poem, I particularly like the first half, the second half isn't as good and I'll go into why in a bit. I enjoy the ...

Yo Spinelli, I think you've categorised this incorrectly, cause it certainly isn't a narrative. It's philosophical and it's a bit of a rant and it tells a little bit of ...

Aaaah where you been?! I miss you being in my crew! I checked out the picture and explanation and I dig it for being a catalyst for this poem. This ...

Hey Preten, I thoughts I might preempt the possible request to review (unless you're sick of my comments already! And in that cause, it kind of sucks to be you ...

Tiny Dancer, Be honest with me, were you reading MY horoscope?!?! This is very cute, and while it may have seemed a very pointless exercise you've created an incredibly usable ...

Hi Birkoff, This is... ridiculous. xD And funny and silly. I can't write humour, I don't have that kind of funny bone, which is always a little sad. But this ...

Hola Mucho! So Trident is right that this is heavy stuff! I haven't gotten to the first section yet because of the need to remove this from The Green Room! ...

Hey Prettyface! So I understand what dogs' contest was/is (I don't know if it is finished yet!) but I think that this is sliding it a little bit. First thing ...

Hi Aley, I feel like this is very forced. You're not trying too hard to give us something super interesting, I don't think. Maybe that's an unfair assessment, and if ...

Hi lulu! I like what you have here, you've got a strong narrator with a voice that is easy to follow and simple to get your head around. I enjoy ...

Hola gummiebaers! I really like what you're saying here! I think it's super cute and you have a good idea of images and what you want to include in the ...

Hey Cela, I hope you're doing well this fine day! I think I understand what you're going for here and I think you're almost making it work. The juxtaposition between ...

Hullo Antonio! I apologise for taking some time to get to this, and for not responding to your PM earlier, time got away from me in a bad way. Forgive ...