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This was incredible. I love the message, and just everything about it. Great job!

Thanks so much for all of your reviews. I found them really helpful. The rhyming scheme and punctuation are terrible, looking back. Thank you for pointing that out to me. ...

This work was amazing. I love how you really tapped into the raw emotion behind a breakup. I can feel it as she's narrating. There's power there, in those words. ...

Wow. Dark much? I loved it. Unfortunately, I do have one bad thing to say. I think a different style would have worked better: prose, or a different form of ...

Wow, that was good. I loved that you brought out the darkness in the water that people don't usually think of. And I loved the characters that you created without ...

I loved this poem. Dripping with attitude. Keep up the good work!

Thanks so much. Those are good points, and I appreciate your review. I'll think about the capitalization a little more next time.

That was really good. I love the imagery, and how simple it was. You did a great job.

Thanks for pointing that out! You're right, there should be a comma there.