PeijiRestoration

Thank you for the review! I knew something seemed off with my meter! Thanks for the suggestions, I will definitely consider them!

Thanks for the review! Wow, reading this again, it really does seem like I'm talking about a horse! That was not my intention, but it certainly comes off that way. ...

Is it sad that this was written about a video game character? I guess inspiration can really come from anywhere lol.

@soundofmind Here's my latest non-NaPo poem! Thanks again for your donation!

Thank you for the feedback!

Thanks!

And I knew this poem was lacking something, but I wasn't sure what. Thanks for showing me what it was. I'll definitely be taking your advice to make this better! ...

Thanks!

Thanks for the advice! I think I will look into NaPo!

@ellasnotebook I think you've read this already, but maybe not.

@ellasnotebook This one I know you haven't read yet. If you have a chance, please review!

Thanks for the suggestion on the line change! The line seemed off to me too, but I wasn't sure how to fix it.

Thank you!

Thank you!

Sorry, my review was submitted twice