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Re: Across the Atlantic- First 3 entries
Thanks! I'm the same way about the Titanic, which is what I decided to write this;) I do agree with the journal and carrying on a conversation, as I try ...
Jan 24, 2014 -
Re: Across the Atlantic- First 3 entries
Thanks you! I understand what you mean by feeding too much info. Like I said to @ComicalCrafty, this is an old book that I never finished and recently decided to ...
Jan 24, 2014 -
Re: Across the Atlantic- First 3 entries
Thanks! This is actually an old book I had started but never finished, so I decided to pick it up. I did actually take some inspiration from the Dear America ...
Jan 24, 2014 -
Re: Melting Diamonds
You're welcome!!
Dec 2, 2013 -
Re: Optimism and Our Country of America
Hey thanks!! This is the final draft of th essay, but YWS didn't want to cooperate with me as far as the formatting:/ I did have a time limit (since ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Polluted Romance (First time I ever wrote in second person)
I understood by the end of the peice that he was a robot, but I just read it over again, and I must have missed the part where you said ...
Nov 19, 2013 -
Re: Polluted Romance (First time I ever wrote in second person)
Pointing something out about your review. That was a comma splice, not a fused sentence. We went over that in English class today, so that's why I noticed;)
Nov 19, 2013 -
Re: Rain
I'm sorry if you thought I was trying to stifle or offend your creativity, that's not what was meant. I was simply saying what I do or do not like, ...
Nov 12, 2013 -
Re: Rain
I'm sorry, but that's not what I assume and it's rude of you to think so. I'm not forcing my opinions on anyone, simply stating them. And besides, those weren't ...
Nov 12, 2013 -
Re: If the World Could Only Love Me
Cool!! Then it's especially great;)
Nov 11, 2013 -
Re: October
Umm, okay, I don't really know what else to tell you:/
Nov 10, 2013 -
Re: October
What?
Nov 10, 2013 -
Re: Optimism and Our Country of America
Hey!! Thanks for the review!! I see what you mean about that part. I'd love to change it, but I'm afraid I've already sent it in. *crosses fingers* I should ...
Nov 1, 2013 -
Re: Optimism and Our Country of America
Thanks for the encouragement!! I hope to at least advance past local.
Nov 1, 2013 -
Re: Voice of Democracy, Audio Essay
I also wrote this essay!! I did my recording at church tho, so I don't have the audio:/ Which is a bummer, since I think I did well and it ...
Oct 31, 2013
