PeaceLuvPoems

AND OH YES. WRITE A SEQUEL.

I know. Some people type like that cuz there's supposed to be some sort of "effect" but it really, it just really hurts my head.

What's wrong with being nice?

Thank you! I'm really glad you think so! And yes, I missed a word there. Haha

Thank you! I thought about making a "sequel" for Emily, and I might do it! Yes, they are sisters, and I'll try to make it better when I revise it. ...

Hm... I see. raNdom capItaol leTers like THAT? You absolutely hilarious. JUST. But no, I think I would like you serious pieces, too! I would love to read them! I'll ...

Oh I'm sorry! I do that a lot.., skip over things... SORRY.

I really like how you used the repitition here! I also happen to know that finding good rhymes is not very easy! So good job on that! I really like ...

Oh geez wait I need to add more: I love how the tornado at the very beginning has absolutely nothing to do with the entire story. I am going to ...

How is churning not a word? It's in the dictionary. And this sounded really rude. You probably could have said it nicer, or at least trying to give suggestions, instead ...

ITS SHERLOCK ISN'T IT?

MaraRobin, Is you avatar a picture of you?

Haha, I like you...

Sorry I took so long to reply! I don't come on here often, I'll check it out when I can!

No problem. ^_^